I am as gentle as a purring kitten.
I am as brave as a soldier.
I am as vulnerable as a deer.
I am as fast as an ostrich.
I am as slow as turtle.
I am as new as freshly baked bread.
I am as old as the couch from the 60s.
I am as smart as Albert Einstein.
I am as dumb as the man who puts electricity in the hot tub.
I am as colorful as a rainbow.
I am as drab as a rainy day.
I am as affectionate as a puppy.
I am as aggressive as a not so hip-pity hop-poty hippopotamus.
I am as generous as Santa Claus.
I am as selfish as the man who didn't want to share his things.
I am as kind as Mother Teresa.
I am as cruel as Vlad III of Romania.
I am human.
In this poem I use an anaphora, apostrophe, many similes, and an alliteration. The anaphora I use in the poem is "I am as" which is a the beginning of the majority of the lines. The apostrophes in my poem are when I address Mother Teresa and Vlad III of Romania. The majority of my lines are similes such as I am as old as a couch from the 60s. The alliteration in my poem is the hip-pity hop-pity hippopotamus.
The House of Hades by Rick Riodan
2/10-Monday- 10 minutes in class + 10 minutes outside of class- pages 161-184
2/11-Tuesday- 10 minutes in class + 20 minutes outside of class- pages 185-217
2/12-Wednesday- 10 minutes in class + 10 minutes outside of class- pages 217-236
2/13-Thursday- 20 minutes outside of class- pages 237-254
2/14-Friday- 10 minutes in class- pages 254-262
2/16-Sunday- 20 minutes annotating "Halo" for blog and preparation to write my poem
Total Time= 120 minutes
Hi Omar,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem. Your use of the techniques we have learned was very nice. I especially like how each line contradicts the other. Overall, very nice poem!
-Kate
Hey Omar,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem! The techniques that you used it really made the poem sound great! I love you photo at the bottom!
Bria
Hi Omar,
ReplyDeleteI see you put a lot of effort into your poem. I like the wordle that you added at the end. I am fascinated that you addressed Mother Teresa and Vlad III of Romania. Keep up the good work. What was your inspiration?
Sincerely, Katherine Ann