"Got to go Stephanie! Some bimbo hit my car
from behind," Melissa said. She got out of her car and started to walk to
the car that hit her. Then she saw who was in the car, Tom, the most careless
person in school. "Excuse you, you hit my car and I was on the
phone," Melissa exclaimed.
"So, what does that have to do with me,"
Tom replied.
"You hit me from behind and I was having an
important conversation with my friend," Melissa snapped angrily.
"Maybe if you weren't talking on the phone,
you could have seen me behind you and not hit the breaks all of a
sudden."
"You don't have the right to tell me how to
drive, you ugly freak! Plus you hit my mini cooper and left a big dent. You are
going to pay to get that fixed."
"I am not paying for anything. If you can pay
to get your nose done, then you can pay for the dent. That is not my
fault."
"What did you say?"
"You heard me."
"I can't listen to your ugly voice anymore!
Bye-bye!" Tom drove off at 100 miles per hour, leaving Melissa
enraged.
Hey Omar.
ReplyDeleteThis was very well written. I felt like I was right there watching it go down! Please keep writing things like this!
Keep Blogging,
Mary Beth
Hey Omar,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your dialogue post. The part about Melissa's nose job was a nice touch. I liked how you kept the characters personalities throughout the dialogue; you stressed through Melissa's words, how much of a freak Tom was.
Keep Up the Good Blogging,
Amanda
Hey Omar
ReplyDeleteI also really enjoyed your post and felt like i was there.
Nathan